What Couldve Been.....
{for my first child I lost..........}
It seemed impossible but, true
Not a thing in the world I could do
Something went wrong, and then you were gone
Oh still, today I miss you
You’re name, I wasn’t sure If you’d be a boy or a girl
Jessica was nice as was the name Mike
I was uncertain till I got the word
You could’ve been my wonder
You could’ve been my prayer
All the time I thing about you
But, you’re still not here
I found out, my little boy
You’ve made my whole world such a joy
I picked out your clothes
The ones you’d wear home
With a blanket and some of your toys
You would be five this year
And have a sister to protect from all fear
To play with, to run with, to grow and have fun with
And from your mother, the best love and care
You could’ve been my wonder
You could’ve been my son
I think of reasons why you left me
You know I can’t think of one
2007-08-09 14:41:43 · 11 answers · asked by ? 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I realize now, that you’re safe
In this world with angels embrace
In time fills a space hence there forms the face
Of you mother when she leaves this race
You could’ve been my wonder
Still in my heart always be
That bright eyed little boy
That someday I’ll get to see
2007-08-09 14:42:22 · update #1
Awww. That's good. Spell check especially the second line, but it is fantastic. You have a gift.
2007-08-09 14:50:44 · answer #1 · answered by angelica_rae 3 · 3⤊ 0⤋
That is a fabulous poem and very sad. Im so sorry for your loss my sister has had 2 misscariages and with those she would have 4 kids instead of two and now another is coming soon. So I am sorry about that it must of been very hard, but you express your feelings through poetry very well. Keep Writting!
2007-08-10 13:01:15 · answer #2 · answered by Sh00ting_St@r! 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This is beautiful
I sense some pain and emotions
about missing someone
and putting this in a prayer, It is nice to put these feeling in poetry.
Thinking of memories, from past present
2007-08-10 10:23:56 · answer #3 · answered by sweet_blue 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful! And sad..Made me think of "Angels Unaware" by Dale Evans. A very good read for a lost child. Keep it up, but I hope your heart is healing. Love from us all....
2007-08-09 23:49:59 · answer #4 · answered by dawnUSA 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Sorry for you're lose. Putting it to words was probably very hard but help-full for you. And you made a very, very good and emotional poem. Thank you for sharing it with the rest of us.
2007-08-14 13:47:35 · answer #5 · answered by Jackolantern 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
;-c I guess it was'nt "SO',o`. BaD !?! I think I did realize when you tried sort a lift of with this one !!... The tear jerking part of this does belong !! But may be a good idea to re`arRrange the sentoments !! Not Bad !! "R"r`r,r'r,r`.'-
2007-08-09 22:48:42 · answer #6 · answered by ? 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Good. Sounds like it could be a song.
2007-08-10 10:53:01 · answer #7 · answered by joezen777 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's very sad Shad. Just very sad.
2007-08-10 08:19:48 · answer #8 · answered by Todd 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very sad,but very good...
2007-08-09 22:28:11 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Thanks ! you are a nice person who share your grief with happiness .
2007-08-10 13:53:33 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋