Please go to my website and let me know how many mistakes, I've made. I just finished working on it and I can't see my mistakes but others can. Send me an email at rubybgc@yahoo.com, the site is www.rubysbooks.i8.com. Thanks
2007-08-09 13:49:48 · 7 answers · asked by Spirit Dancer 5 in Computers & Internet ➔ Other - Computers
Trivial really....but
"Below ARE a few of the stars..."
Shouldn't "Loves Soft Voice" be in quotation marks or italics (I'm not sure)?
(Sorry, not into celebrities so can't check all their spelling)
"Oprah" Winfrey
Very nice "feel" to it though. Relaxing.
2007-08-09 14:03:26 · answer #1 · answered by Amon Ra 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The only thing that struck me as needing improvement was that everything is laid out on vertical and horizontal axes - something an engineer would do! Some diagonal or curving movement would make the site more eye-catching - maybe a toned-down or soft-focus background image in pastel that wouldn't compete with the lettering but just add a little movement. Otherwise a great site! Good luck with your book/film whatever...
2007-08-10 08:30:15 · answer #2 · answered by Who Else? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You need an editor. There are several mistakes I wouldn't expect to see from a writer.
Love's Soft Voice should be italicized. After "Below..." should be are, not is. The verb should match the number of things it's applying to.
There are more errors but you really need an editor that you pay.
2007-08-09 21:22:43 · answer #3 · answered by Greywolf 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's Good My Sister!!!
But I KNOW YOU Have MORE in You!!!
LOOK into Your Heart!!! Dream Those Dreams!!!
I Know You Have Greater Thing Things In YOU!!!
Sleep on it!!! But Before YOU Do Say a Prayer to Wakan Tanka--- The Creator!!!
Burn Some Sage and Sweet Grass if you have it!!!
I know He'll or She'll Answer!!!
Do You Have Part For Me!!!
I'll say a Blessing For YOU and the Movie!!!
Wahoo!!!
2007-08-09 21:20:48 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it looks fine to me, now mind you I can not spell to save my life! I think overall the website looks good. :)
2007-08-09 21:04:04 · answer #5 · answered by Prof. Dave 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
what kind of mistakes?coding mistakes,vulns,grammar mistakes?
2007-08-09 21:01:52 · answer #6 · answered by kerzua 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
looks pretty good as far as I can see...
Good Luck!
2007-08-09 21:00:12 · answer #7 · answered by Josh 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋