Please help me decipher this, I am worried!
Round and round and round we go
The smiles and chorus of childrens' laughter
A whimsical whisper on a rotten wind
Dastardly soft-spoken half truths and seductively hushed lies Crushing, smashing, devouring Placating c***sucking mind r**** a-plenty Passed around like drugs in a schoolyard The first one's free, but in the end it always costs Bitter venomous rancid hate-spittled sneers Crush and destroy every beautiful shred of light left in the dark
And I think to myself, what a beautiful world
What a beautiful world this is That lets me hide this broken bleeding heart behind a wall of glass While the angels suck and f*** and burn it all away Acid-tears of hatred mixed with the gentle sobbing of a broken heart
Embracing the shell of a man I once knew
All that's left is the dead man who once had my eyes An arm buried on a crowded couch, pointing and screaming at my sad silly husk LOOK AT WHAT YOU'VE DONE YOU STUPID SELFISH MAN
2007-08-09 10:14:54 · 3 answers · asked by stillhot28 2 in Social Science ➔ Psychology
Its about the lie you are told in childhood. That lie that life is wonderful and perfect; everyone loves and accepts you. When he (it is a he to represent man, which means both mand and woman) grows older he learns what was shared with him in youth was a lie from his experiences. This shatters him as a man. But in reality no one sees that your heart is broken or tries to understand so they accuse him of being wrong.
It is basically the wake up call that all people face in growing come. The one that says life is nto like your childhood where everyone was nice. Life is a place where people hurt (burn) you on purpose. The life is also a place where you yourself through experiences become cold and harsh and untolerating of others. And in this moment people always blame you for your anger, not trying to understand that your anger is coming from the same place their's is.
Such a truthful poem.
2007-08-09 10:29:10 · answer #1 · answered by Time For Better 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This sounds like a poem that either you or someone else wrote. It is a very powerful statement about the world we live in. There is a big struggle between good and evil, and it appears that evil has the stronghold. This is a very vivid delving into the psyche, with or without the profanity. If you have written this poem, and expect to go somewhere with it, I'd suggest that you leave out the blanked out words and substitute those with other descriptive, non-offensive alternatives. It will still have power. Good luck!
2007-08-09 10:23:21 · answer #2 · answered by gldjns 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow what is that ,ive read it over a couple of times and im still unsure it sounds like he was on a acid trip or mushrooms
2007-08-09 10:25:03 · answer #3 · answered by wildrice64 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋