I'm still planning to edit, and the punctuation is probably off. I just wrote this a few minutes ago:
~Pondering Apology~
Maybe I was the silly fool:
To try to make you stay my friend;
Perhaps the best has been fulfilled,
Though you don't care to make amends.
Maybe I was always the one
Condescending, proud and vain;
Oh! knowing I'm sorry or knowing I'm right
Doesn't always ease the pain.
Thinking back on what has happened,
Thinking of all the things I've revealed;
Interrupting your slight remarks,
Or unconciously ignoring your tiny appeals.
Well, here is my apology, dear friend,
For everything I've ever done wrong:
I hope you never know this hurt,
And never have to sing this song.
Though it's not 100%, this is based off something real. I was really upset last night. Poetry sure helps relieve feelings, doesn't it?
2007-08-09 09:16:07 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I've read a lot of poems, but never one about apology. That's pretty unique! Yes, I agree that creativity is a great emotional outlet. The poem needs a little "polishing", but all in all, it does express your true feelings.
2007-08-09 09:23:37 · answer #1 · answered by gldjns 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It takes quit a woman to realize her faults and apologize for them. When you get this finished to your satisfaction, do send it to your friend.
2007-08-09 18:44:16 · answer #2 · answered by bsharpbflatbnatural 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Your stressed out sentences and words in order to create rhymes.
Other then that very creative and well written.
2007-08-09 16:21:01 · answer #3 · answered by Juefawn™ 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
I loved it. Great structure, flow, and purpose. I feel like when I was cone, you changed something in me.
You're a poet!
2007-08-09 16:25:58 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋