I wrote this on the spot:
I loved him from the start
I new we would never part
My very first love
as beautiful as a dove
He has my heart
his is like a work of art
He is gorgeous in every way
I love this man more every day.
2007-08-08 15:39:50 · 2 answers · asked by RAW DIVA™ 5 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I never heard of Johnny O before
2007-08-08 15:49:16 · update #1
It's such a risk putting your heart out there for people to critique so I applaud you. Keep writing and remember that it doesn't have to rhyme to be good :o)
2007-08-09 16:08:18 · answer #1 · answered by ? 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It feels like a Johnny O song to me...
Excerpt from "Dream Girl/Dream Boy" --
"When you hold me in your arms
I feel so safe and warm
When you look into my eyes
You have me hypnotized
You give me all your love
You're all I'm thinking of
You've made my dreams come true
My heart belongs to you"
Sound familiar? Maybe you should write pop song lyrics.
2007-08-08 22:48:25 · answer #2 · answered by Bad Kitty! 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋