Mind a little poetry from the top of my head?

Question

If orange were red
And red were blue
Would you look at me
If I said I was you

If the truth were a lie
And a lie were a joke
Could you tell my painting
But by the stroke

Cause you plagiarized
And you stole from me
Now a lie you are
And shall ever be

When the sun gets mad
Orange turns to red
And the strokes on the canvas
Is where I bleed

Now you are me
And I got what I’m due
And a joke is a joke
Cause I stole from you too

I'm kind of stressed from the day and bored with the night. Do you mind if I share a little of my plight. I have nothing to do, but to blow off some steam, and scream in the nightmare that used to be my dream.

Answer 1

wow, that's pretty cool. i like that allot, you have great talent, wow, keep up the good work,

that made my day thanks so much, would love to see more that you write, take care and have a great day :)))))))))

Answer 2

Yeah it was pretty cool I liked it a lot I think this is the first great poem that I've read from this site today. It reminded me a little bit of a connect the dots though and I don't mean that in a bad way but it was great.

Answer 3

That ROCKED.......