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A mom and daughters relashonship. Me and my mom are not very close at all and i would just like a poem about a bad relashonship between a mom and daughter. please anyone have any??

2007-08-08 12:06:17 · 3 answers · asked by chelc 1 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

3 answers

I can write one. Or try.

Storm

The rain won't fall,
But the thunder crashes
Over and over again...
Feeling trapped,
There's no way out,
And so we must keep going
Forward still;
But we press against the walls,
Slink along in shadows,
Hating, but somehow hoping
That the sun will come out for us
After all...
We wish to somehow escape,
But neither of us wants to move first,
And we don't know
If we should head together,
Or apart...


This is the best I can do. Hope you like it! :)

2007-08-08 12:33:58 · answer #1 · answered by cadence 2 · 0 0

Mother to Daughter

Ungrateful, spiteful, little miss
What did I do to deserve this?
..Can’t you give me any space
..That’s why I can’t stand this place!

I nursed you, fed you, kept you clean
Why must you act so cruel and mean?
..Why must I answer stupid questions?
..I don’t need the help of “your” suggestions

Just wait till dad gets home from work
He’ll set you straight, you little jerk
..Oh, yeah, like you really think he'll care?
..He sits around in his underwear!

What must I do for some respect?
Where did I go wrong, was it neglect?
..There’s nothing wrong, just go away!
..I pray to God you’ll die someday!

(silence)

God for sure will grant your wish
As sure as the ocean is full of fish
..You know I didn’t mean what I said
..It’s not that I really wish you dead

Oh, I know, I know, I remember how
I cursed my mother, called her a cow
..Don’t say it, I know it, payback will come
..I may not be bright, but I’m far from dumb

And so the cycle never ends
Mother to daughter…but seldom friends


Kevin M. Sorbello

2007-08-08 19:33:42 · answer #2 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 1 0

http://www.poetry.com
See if you can find sumthing there.

2007-08-08 19:11:56 · answer #3 · answered by americangurl_28 5 · 0 0

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