given the opportunity, i would like to become a key contributor to your firm.
2007-08-07 06:53:05 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I am confused about the use of the word 'contributor'; perhaps something else, like 'member'
2007-08-07 07:01:04 · answer #1 · answered by Experto Credo 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
If given opportunity, I would like to become a key contributor to your firm.
2007-08-07 15:09:19 · answer #2 · answered by Manz 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How about this:
"If given the opportunity I feel that I could become a key contributor in your firm." Sounds a little more confident, ya think?
2007-08-07 13:59:04 · answer #3 · answered by Puzzler 5 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Given the opportunity, I WILL become a key contributor to your firm.
Better live up to it when you get hired.
2007-08-07 15:35:48 · answer #4 · answered by ghouly05 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well yes but,
Given the opportunity, I WOULD become a key contributor to your firm.
Don't give them any doubt.
2007-08-07 13:58:21 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
i think firstbtheir has to be an if in the starting to lend that touch of giving the answere the choice to chose to say yes or no next up u liking to be some thing sounds a lil like u will try but if u dont then do not blame kind so u say i shall strive to be a key player or i shall try atleast to be a key contributors
hope this helps bye
2007-08-07 14:00:44 · answer #6 · answered by niss 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
tell them you 'would become' instead of 'would like to'
2007-08-07 15:24:06 · answer #7 · answered by J 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i agree with sweetie pie. tell them what you can do for them. it sounds confident!
2007-08-07 14:00:24 · answer #8 · answered by Brittany 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋