What do you think of this?

Question

It was a quarter to midnight. Three dark figures crowded around a small marble table in a spherical room. The orange glare of the crackling fire behind them shadowed their features. Dressed in long, black cloaks, the figures glared down at their rippling reflections in the glistening pool of shallow water that filled the circular dip in the center of the table.
“Hurry up!” a man whispered impatiently. “The sooner we know what’s happening with them, the better!”
The woman with her back to the fireplace shot him a look of annoyance. “Patience,” she said slowly, her lips barely moving, “is the key to seeing into the future. Now calm down, Dexan, or I shall refuse to help you.”
“We didn’t ask you to help us, we’re telling you!” he replied, his dark eyes blazing with rage.

Answer 1

Not bad at all, but you never know before completing the book.

CHeeRioS

Answer 2

I love it! It really explains what is happening but you should tell more about whats around them and explain the Aura. you should also tell what the people are thinking and what there faces look like. But I liked it.

Answer 3

Please post the remainder of the novel. This will help us better judge the work on dedication, skill, and cohesiveness.

Answer 4

good..i like it alot...keep up the good work

Answer 5

very good. if it were a book, i would read it.

Answer 6

wow! this is really good!!! keep writing