Assumption.
delicate word play
obscure
observation
lets me know
you think you have a clue
how can you know what I won’t even tell myself?
The nerve.
2007-08-07 04:24:29 · 8 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Sandra...who's "dooly"? :)
tight little poem
2007-08-07 19:09:01 · answer #1 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Assume is a word that makes an *** of of u and me. I like your turn on this, we all have a lot of nerve when it comes to things we don't know beans about.
2007-08-07 11:52:41 · answer #2 · answered by Fr. Al 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like Father Al giving me a good "enlightenment."
2007-08-07 13:30:58 · answer #3 · answered by TD Euwaite? 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Why not try this in 'poem of the month' at myverdict.net
2007-08-07 12:05:11 · answer #4 · answered by Taffd 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
A spider on a grape,
A trackball 'neath my fingers,
Arthritis in my joints,
My memory still lingers...
2007-08-07 14:50:01 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
awesome. i had to read the question at the end though a few times before i got it.
2007-08-07 11:28:56 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
I dont think this is a poem.....
but I like ur way of thinking.....ur 4 line poem/whatever speaks lots of things....really its really nice....!!!
keep it up..
2007-08-07 11:34:00 · answer #7 · answered by Shivi 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
yeah, simple, but perhaps not in the way you meant it, hmmmm.... res ipsa loquitur... well, not quite, in your case...
a little conceited and arrogant... me thinks... humility and honest introspection are the soul and spirit of poetry, I think you need to learn both, just my 2 cents...
2007-08-07 13:39:50 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋