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Listen, i'm creating a story filled with an amazing adventure and horror. It's about a little village who keeps having strange attacks by this mysterious creature every night. At first, the creature starts attacking thier cattle, leaving the corpse behind. Then, it attacks homes and goes after the innocent villagers. The warriors of the village try to take matters into thier own hands by killing this monster, but none came back alive. But thier is one villager that wont watch his village be currupter by this animal. 16 year-old Wayne goes on a journey on hunting this monster down and destroying it once and for all with the help of his firend Kira. Like it?

2007-08-06 10:56:34 · 9 answers · asked by GhostGirl 1 in Arts & Humanities Books & Authors

9 answers

Very creative!!!! Good Job!!

2007-08-06 10:59:04 · answer #1 · answered by j b 5 · 0 0

yeah, it sounds good...but doesn't the story plot kind of sound like the movie "The Village" i mean except for the boy trying to stop the monster. but village, attacks, leaving behind corpses. i guess if you made it different enough it would sound really good and not like a copy of the village.

2007-08-06 11:04:18 · answer #2 · answered by Randomnocity 2 · 0 0

It sounds interesting i cant say if its go or not i have to read the whole book send me a copy when ur done wit it i like books like that.

2007-08-06 11:01:37 · answer #3 · answered by ~ Jay ~ 5 · 0 0

So far it sounds good.
I am looking forward to reading it all.
Thanks!
:)

2007-08-06 10:59:20 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

I like it. Please post more in the details or post a web page when it is complete.

2007-08-06 10:59:25 · answer #5 · answered by Ralph 7 · 0 0

sounds interesting
id read it !!

2007-08-06 11:01:41 · answer #6 · answered by Kim H 4 · 0 0

uh, sure if u work on your spelling.

2007-08-06 10:59:34 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Yea, I'd read it.

2007-08-06 10:59:19 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

ooo! sounds good! i'd read it!

2007-08-06 11:11:05 · answer #9 · answered by Shiloh. 2 · 0 0

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