its about how someone feels after someone breaks up with them
Swaying through golden hearts,
When it ends, greif overcomes,
The victim becomes,
Broken, in despair,
Hating life for being so unfair,
Shattered into many parts.
Feeling no reason to move on,
Dreaming in the past,
Of a relationship that was supposed to last,
Forgetting everything, confined in desolate fears,
Daily shedding many tears.
This is a ballad of pain and sorrow,
Written for those, hurt and hollow,
Thrashed by one simple word,
Goodbye, all is lost when that is heard,
Rays of joy shone on them before,
Now, pain inflicts forevermore.
2007-08-05 17:40:15 · 12 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
after daily shedding many tears is the line throughout their soul, tragedy spawns
2007-08-05 17:42:20 · update #1
I love poems, poems reflect hearts. By reading poem one can feel what poet wanted to express in words. In your poem I love this too much
"Thrashed by one simple word
Goodbye, all is lost when that is heard"
You wrote like a professional poet. Keep it up nice work.
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2007-08-06 23:43:40 · answer #1 · answered by Ari 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-10-14 02:59:37 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh,my god this poem ..i feel like i can really relate to this poem...every line is so meaningful yet so alive...this poem tells a story and i must say i like it...and what a good way to express a feeling..good job!!
2007-08-05 23:10:46 · answer #3 · answered by m@r 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I hear you. Sounds like something I would write. I heard goodbye a lot too. =(...but love the poem.
2007-08-05 18:22:40 · answer #4 · answered by Mary J 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is exactly how my father felt after mother died. They had been married for 63 years. We all felt that way for a while, but his goes on.
Thank you for putting it into words so exactly.
2007-08-06 11:05:44 · answer #5 · answered by bsharpbflatbnatural 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I really like... it it looks veryyyy much like my last poems! LOL...
I feel my situation there!!!
It has got it's own music, like a nice rythm.... AWESOME! we could keep on answering each other's poetry questions. If you feel like!
2007-08-05 17:55:58 · answer #6 · answered by Calíope!* 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds good to me.
2007-08-05 17:44:11 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2007-08-05 17:43:53 · answer #8 · answered by ragaa! 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its sounds ok yet such a sad poem
2007-08-05 19:28:38 · answer #9 · answered by Mr.Sleepy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's very powerful..makes me feel what the poet feels. very good.
2007-08-05 17:43:24 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋