http://www.fictionpress.com/~evilfluffiness Some of them are stories, but those are longer so you'll probably just want to review a poem, if you read anything.
2007-08-05 12:14:12 · 3 answers · asked by redundantredundancy 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
You both sound terribly generic. I doubt either of you even read any of my poems. Thanks for the star, lol, but I'm not going to choose you as Best Answer.
2007-08-05 16:05:49 · update #1
For she who dares to ask...I'm impressed. You could almost say it was a "carmen figuraturum". Clever girl. For the apology...perfect...such simplicity, yet elegant in its purity. I hope you get an "A". The others were "okay", but could use a little editing perhaps.
I wasn't going to review your poems because you didn't actually "post" them. However, your "name" showed a creative nature and I decided to check them out. I'm glad I did...but wish you would have posted them one at a time so we could have savored and reviewed them one by one.
In any event, they were some of the best I've seen...surely you've been doing this for awhile. What ever you do...don't stop. keep writing.
2007-08-07 16:30:31 · answer #1 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You're extremely creative. I like the way you create your poems. They are unique and have a nice style to them. Don't change anything, because poetry is meant is be what you want it to be. Would love to read more of your work. You are brilliant and have a bright future ahead of you. Like other writers on here, I do believe in YOU. You can go far, so keep your head up. You're a STAR!!!! Never forget that. Keep it up!!
2007-08-05 15:09:11 · answer #2 · answered by djb32067433_1 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I think a balance of white space, proper text, compositon - wether comparison contrast, description, anything and briefness make a poem. as long as words explain the meaning within. If that makes any sense..
2007-08-05 12:52:16 · answer #3 · answered by Patricia M 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋