Dad, ypur someone special,
Born so you could have me.
I've never found a better friend,
Apart from you dad.
I'm proud to call you dad,
Not everyone can be one,
But your the best of all,
In the whole wide world.
I may not say this evertime,
But I mean every word,
Thanks for being there dad,
I love you!
2007-08-04 22:29:11 · 18 answers · asked by Bella 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
'your' not 'ypur'... sorry
2007-08-04 22:36:50 · update #1
Its beautiful...
Poetry must reflect your feelings..yours does!!
Just spell check it and send it...
2007-08-04 22:32:38 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wish one of my 3 daughters would send me such a nice Poem... Well done he will be proud of you.
2007-08-05 05:51:08 · answer #2 · answered by Best of British 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Except for changing "evertime" to "every time" I'd say it should make him feel uncomfortably unmasculine. (A good thing...it means emotional.)
2007-08-05 05:33:00 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yup, as long you mean it from the bottom of your heart. As long you have the gratitude for your dad's sacrification.
2007-08-05 05:32:54 · answer #4 · answered by Zect 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well its not exactly shakespeare, still if my 5 year old daughter had wrote that I would be over the moon
good luck
2007-08-05 05:47:16 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yes it is so sweet for DAD i know he will appreciate it you are so creative
2007-08-08 03:31:34 · answer #6 · answered by budrut 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good just a few corrections pl ,
your ....u r or you are,
you are the best of all,
say this everytime,
your loving ...........dad oh yes my dad
2007-08-05 05:37:49 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Felt a little tear in my eye.
That means it's good!
2007-08-05 05:32:46 · answer #8 · answered by emeraldisle2222 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
wonderful .... I envy ur dad to have such beloved doughter :)
2007-08-05 05:34:58 · answer #9 · answered by jo n jo 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
a very good poem and your dad will love this....it will make him very hapy.....
2007-08-05 05:32:45 · answer #10 · answered by Audrey V 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋