Smile Forever
By Semper Fi 83
8/4/07
I would give anything,
To see you smile forever.
What kind of glue could I use,
To keep you and me stuck together?
You are the sunshine,
That brightens up my sky.
I know how Adam felt,
Cause you're the apple of my eye.
No pun intended,
You'd never feed me sin.
You're the woman that I married,
My precious Jacqueline.
More than a song,
You're more like my soundtrack.
When things go wrong,
I know you have my back,
My front, my sides,
You have everything covered.
More than my wife,
You're my friend and my lover!
What can I do to make you smile forever?
2007-08-04 13:16:02 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I gave to you a shining star
not for a great poem,
but for who you are.
A man who obviously loves his wife
and sees more than himself in God's gift of life.
2007-08-05 01:12:44 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
This poem as you know, is unique and not thought of by some men who would rather stay married and yet in love with another woman. No wonder, I'm a fan of you and your wife (she's very lucky to have you).
A bright star for YOU.
2007-08-05 01:09:34 · answer #2 · answered by mary 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Great Job especially if this is for a gift to your wife. I suggest getting it printed on really nice paper and putting it in a really nice frame for her, for an anniversary present or something of the like. She'll love it.
2007-08-04 20:23:45 · answer #3 · answered by ithek_thundervoice 4 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Enjoy the Star!
2007-08-04 20:23:30 · answer #4 · answered by free_mumia_or_else 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
You go, brother! 1 star comin right up!
2007-08-04 20:34:42 · answer #5 · answered by KayJay 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Your wife is very lucky. Enjoy your star!
God Bless.
2007-08-04 21:18:05 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
You have a gift man. Thank you so much for the poem. God Bless.
2007-08-04 21:03:00 · answer #7 · answered by Joel 2 5 · 2⤊ 1⤋
I will give you a star, just a minute, i will also tell me friends to give you stars!
2007-08-04 20:25:03 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice. Uplifting, cheery, and light. +1!
2007-08-04 20:24:26 · answer #9 · answered by A.P. 4 · 2⤊ 1⤋
That's great! Keep lovin' Jesus! Have an awesome day!
2007-08-04 20:25:07 · answer #10 · answered by Captivated 4 · 2⤊ 2⤋