I am 13 and decided to try my hand at writing a coupole of books this is just one of my better ideas. Its about a girl who finds her way into a secret world called capardom. soon she is caught up in the midst of a war and can't find her way back home. all her new found friends turn against her and she's left alone.
2007-08-03 07:04:08 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Books & Authors
Sounds like the Narnia Chronicles.
2007-08-03 07:06:48 · answer #1 · answered by austinblnd 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh this sounds like a great idea! I would definitely read it.
Though my suggestion to you is try writing it, and whether or not you finish it, a year later you can go back and read it again and see how good your writing is. Also, if you read a lot of books, look and see how the author portrays images in your mind in a way that keeps your attention.
i tried writing a book, but i got frustrated. a year later i read it and nearly died...i didn't realize how bad it was, but I have gotten so much better over the year. Practicing on smaller stories helps, too.
maybe if you get a chance you can post it on http://fictionpress.com, because they have a copyright, i think. i would love to read it sometime! feel free to share it if you like.
2007-08-03 14:30:24 · answer #2 · answered by agalicktourq 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Reminds me of the Chronicles of Narnia. But, since that's such a fantastic series, I think this book will do well!
I like the idea, because it mixes fantasy and friendship and action. But the question is, can you pull it off?
As long as there are enough plot twists to keep us interested (but not too much so that the book feels like a cheesy TV show), then I think I might want to read it!!
Good luck!!
2007-08-03 14:08:51 · answer #3 · answered by xxWannabeWriterxx 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I thought up a story a lot like this when I was about your age. I tried writing it and thinking about it until finally I realized it wasn't good enough to write. Too common of a story.
2007-08-03 14:10:46 · answer #4 · answered by K.K. 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey i'm 13 too. And i LOVE to read. That's sounds like a really good idea. I would probably read it. Good Luck!!!!
2007-08-03 14:53:34 · answer #5 · answered by froghopper1993 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Interesting, however I think that this story line has been done before. You're on the right track, maybe you could make the war a secret war. idk. I'm not really into scifi I do more real life and historical writing.
God Bless!!
2007-08-03 14:14:55 · answer #6 · answered by didthegrasssing 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is still to basic of a premise. You need to flesh it out for us to give you anything but a generic answer. It is a great first thought.
2007-08-03 14:08:36 · answer #7 · answered by Ralph 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
but how does it end? I might take a look at it but, it would have to captivate me in less than 10 pages for me to read it.
2007-08-03 14:14:29 · answer #8 · answered by lovely 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
good luck..tell me more about it...
2007-08-03 14:20:34 · answer #9 · answered by Chula24 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋