I don't know you
Only me
I've always been alone
You see
I only know one
Not two
That's why it's hard to
Be with you
You might think I am
All you need
But you shouldn't
Be with me
You can't fix me
You can't help
So for now
It's just myself
2007-08-03 05:09:37 · 9 answers · asked by Philomena M 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Two words: Love it!
i think it's a fantastic poem - simple, but it says everything you need it to.
Keep up the good work!
2007-08-04 22:36:48 · answer #1 · answered by pullthetrigger 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Like a symphony by Mr Mahler, it goes all over the place in a self obsessed kind of way, then just as I think I maybe hear a reminder of some half forgotten children's playground song somewhere, it suddenly comes to an unexpected unresolved and unsatisfactory stop.
2007-08-03 06:02:09 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Ditto
2007-08-07 03:45:52 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Fantastic title...
it's all downhill from there though
(I mean the title's fantastic if it isn't actually your 44th poem and you didn't write it on Jan 17)
2007-08-03 07:17:01 · answer #4 · answered by Ozymandius 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Egad. There are 43 others?
2007-08-03 05:55:45 · answer #5 · answered by Ronnie 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
A tiskit a tasket,I had to put one in a casket.
2007-08-03 05:12:00 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you planning to go up to 100 poems? that'd be kinda cool. if they're all pretty good, i mean
2007-08-03 07:56:26 · answer #7 · answered by agalicktourq 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hallmark is crying out for scribes of your quality.
2007-08-03 05:49:43 · answer #8 · answered by Tyler's Mate 4 · 2⤊ 1⤋
barf
2007-08-03 05:40:37 · answer #9 · answered by art_flood 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋