I do, who else will believe?

Question

Who will Believe?



(about a very gifted child I know at the school where I teach, yup, a six year old psychic, he truly is amazin' *^_^*)




Rubber ducks and matchbox cars
A stranger in first grade
Why you know all that will happen?
you’re just a product as God made

Spirits all around you
voices callin’ out
in you mind there’s no denying,
adults hold the doubt

And the pain reigns though
your pleading case, deaf ears back to you
You’re the only one who’s left alone
who’ll accept you?
~
(Chorus)
‘Cause you’re the only one
you hear cryin’ out
Shadow’s adjacent ‘round you
mirrored in your eyes
Still they don’t see
what’s been hidin’ underneath
There’s no time now for foolishness
Who will believe?
~
Your predictions of the weather
blowed off as shear luck
When you said James would get better
once more just not enough

Almost seven now and don’t know how
to prove God made you devine
What’s it take for a kid today
turning water into wine?

And the pain reigns though
your pleading case, deaf ears back to you
You’re the only one who’s left alone
who’ll accept you?
~
(Chorus)
‘Cause you’re the only one
you hear cryin’ out
Shadow’s adjacent ‘round you
mirrored in your eyes
Still they don’t see
what’s been hidin’ underneath
There’s no time now for foolishness
Who will believe?

Answer 1

I believe!

Answer 2

Well I believe you
as far as the falling on deaf ears
this would be the govt.

I am trying to think of an incident
afew years ago a man had a red paper clip
traded it in for a house.

In this poem there was a child
who had a rubber duckie and a match box

Answer 3

When reading this it made me think and feel for all the divine beings that had been in this world....What they must have gone through must be as such as you describe in your writting......and to actually have gone through what you describe and still stand strong....remarkable we have to acknowledge this people even if we dont believe in them........To actually be call a fool or speaking like a mad or crazy person and marked by the public.......as such you had describe ....I for one could not imagine the traumatic effect it can make on someone so young.......and yet Shad dont you worry...God is some way will give strength to such people....and who are we compare to the almighty powers protecting those he had given his blessing.

It is us that we must look at.........cant we admit not at such people remarkable ability only but especially at what this people have to endure and go through in life (not having a normal childhood, condamed by the public....even micheal jackson made a big deal out of not having a normal childhood and he is love by a lot of people but this people are famous at first for being a weirdo, turn down by almost everyone they met.....shut up when they tried to speak) and yet are able to stand strong and have enough courage to live their life as normal as can be........this for me is amazing enough.... a miracle enough....even i cannot say for sure i will be able to go through if i am constantly put down especially when i tried to speak.....I would probably rather be quiet and demure and seclude myself from the public.

Answer 4

Interesting poem...here's some suggestions:

S1L3: try "why do you know what will happen"

S1L4: try "you're as pure a product as God ever made"

S2L3: "in your mind...", not "in you mind"

S2L4, try "only adults have any doubt"

S3L1: "though"...or "through"?

S3L4: not enough beats...maybe "who'll accept you as you?"??

C1L3: "shadows", not "shadow's"
C1L8: not enough beats again (maybe it sounds different with music).

S4L2: "blown", not "blowed"
S4L4: add a comma so it reads, "one more, just not enough"

S5L1: try, "almost seven and still don't know how"

must be a very interesting child

Answer 5

That's pretty cool I just wish people would believe a little bit more about things that they can't explain but then that would scare a lot of people to think of terms that you can't always explane everything that is going to happen or has happened.

Answer 6

Wow! How cool! How observant and empathetic for you to see this! He's lucky to have you in his life.
"Black thunder, roaring in my head
The void is all around me,
I hear the thunder; I see the red.
White lightning, flashing in the sky;
Where does it come from,
It's seen just in my eyes!......"-dk
So know where you're coming from..

Answer 7

That was splendid another great poem Shad ! keep writting!

Answer 8

you should ask him for winning lottery numbers