Hi there, Eben. Here are my few minor suggestions:
1. Change your main photo to the one w/ the guitar. The warm colors in that one look great on you. You also look like a model in that photo. You look like a compleeeetely different person in the T-shirt and jeans one. Completely. So, you may want to add another pic or 2 for variety...maybe one in a suit and another doing something sporty.
2. In the 1st paragraph, you'll want to put a comma between "speed limit" and "I'm an excellent balance..."
3. Maybe changing the wording to, "I can be a true gentleman and genuinely romantic" will be less awkward.
That's all from me...it's a great page. Now go get 'em!
2007-08-02 11:56:23
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answered by ? 6
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Good Evening, Eben X! I looked at your profile and if what you say is honest and up front, you appear to be a nice guy even though I'm old enough to be your mother and then some...anyway, good luck! I pray that you find a good woman that doesn't play games and will love you for "you"! God bless you!
2007-08-02 18:46:23
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answered by wittylaughingwoman 3
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Looks good to me. If I was single, I would def. drop you a line! Like someone else said, just post 2-3 more photos if you can.
2007-08-02 18:43:13
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answered by higherlovetx 5
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I would take out the negative, "bad personal hygine is a deal breaker" and replace it with, "good personal hygine is important to me and I am looking for someone who feels the same" or something more positive.
2007-08-02 18:45:40
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answered by SodaLicious 5
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You sound like a great guy, good luck with your adventure.
If you ever need a cop, I think I can find one for you.
2007-08-02 18:47:41
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answered by patti duke 7
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i like that you dont do drugs or drink alot- guys that do are a BIG turnoff to me.
Um... nothing bad that I can see- maybe a few more pics. and list you hobbies- like what sports and stuff you are into .
2007-08-02 18:42:14
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answered by Mrs. Ryan Sheckler 4
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I think you should leave it the way it is. You state what you want and what you are looking for. Don't settle for less.
2007-08-02 18:42:32
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answered by Anonymous
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You already posted this like 20 minutes ago. Sheesh.
2007-08-02 18:44:29
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answered by ? 7
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It looks cool to me.
2007-08-02 18:42:22
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answered by Anonymous
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I think its fine
2007-08-02 18:40:55
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answered by bowsgirl1 7
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