please tell me if you see any grammatical errors in this sentence and how can i improve it?

Question

The audience is exposed throughout most of the movie to a story they believe is real when in reality, it is completely made up by Verbal.

Answer 1

Viewers of (movie title) are exposed throughout most of the movie to a story they believe to be real when in reality it is fabricated by Verbal.

**I would change these things, but there aren't any grammatical errors as far as I can see...is Verbal a name?