you hit me once
shame on you
you hit me twice
and I shot you
now behind bars
I sit and I wait
to tell my story
to judge and state
should I have aimed
for the arm not the head
I guess it dont matter
your already dead
2007-08-02 04:49:11 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I did not kill him but divorced him instead.
2007-08-02 05:01:24 · update #1
I'll quit giggling in a few minutes, and tell you I really enjoyed it. I never hit my ex, but maybe I shoulda shot her. Too late now though, she through a temper fit and had a massive coronary.
2007-08-02 11:22:11 · answer #1 · answered by Dondi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Actually "I guess it don't matter, I divorced him instead" would have not made sense but for some reason I liked that line better than "you're already dead."
2007-08-02 15:47:01 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Interesting...
2007-08-02 05:14:05 · answer #3 · answered by Yomi Minamino 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Now you know the legal ramifications
but this is an interesting poem.
of the justice system.
2007-08-02 05:59:47 · answer #4 · answered by sweet_blue 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Got the message across well. Detracted from by the poor grammar and idea construction, but pretty good. (And I am personally gratified!)
2007-08-02 05:57:26 · answer #5 · answered by marconprograms 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it. Its the best revenge poem Ive seen in a while. Really good and it made me laugh. Loved it. = )
2007-08-02 09:43:46 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love twisted poems. Yes I love it.
2007-08-02 06:34:50 · answer #7 · answered by ~AA~ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's kind of good in a weird way
2007-08-02 05:00:29 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
its good in a gross twisted kinda way
2007-08-02 04:52:30 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
i think its good ; disturbing; but good
2007-08-02 04:57:15 · answer #10 · answered by Dacia L 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋