Princess, I'm not sure if you meant this as a poem or a story about what happened to you. If you meant it as a poem, I'm sorry, but it's not a poem, it's a story...what you wrote is called "prose". Additionally, your story has many spelling errors and errors in grammar. You should not use the pound sign (#) to represent "number" in a poem and it's a little questionable if you should use it in a published story either. Also, it sounds like your "friend" made a mistake by not trying to find you in the store, but unless she left you deliberately, it is possible that it isn't anyone's fault, other than your friend "and" you for not having some sort of plan to meet at a certain place in case you got separated. In any event, people do foolish things all the time, but it doens't mean they don't care about you.
You've written poetic pieces and posted them before...this is not one of them. I look forward to seeing you post another poem sometime. Meanwhile, keep writing.
2007-08-05 18:12:08
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answered by Kevin S 7
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I am sure there are wonderful people in your life that cares so much about you.BUT that particular friend of yours obviously does not.Whatever it is we as human should not stop caring for each other,Continue to be your caring self.here is something for you because i care.
The version found written on the wall in Mother Teresa's home for children in Calcutta:
People are often unreasonable, irrational, and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of selfish, ulterior motives. Be kind anyway.
If you are successful, you will win some unfaithful friends and some genuine enemies. Succeed anyway.
If you are honest and sincere people may deceive you. Be honest and sincere anyway.
What you spend years creating, others could destroy overnight. Create anyway.
If you find serenity and happiness, some may be jealous. Be happy anyway.
The good you do today, will often be forgotten. Do good anyway.
Give the best you have, and it will never be enough. Give your best anyway.
In the final analysis, it is between you and God. It was never between you and them anyway.
-this version is credited to Mother Teresa
2007-08-01 18:05:03
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answered by World 3
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NO, NO, NO
Hypothetically, poetry may be part of Arts and Humanities,
You let me have a question with my feeling in question
I care about you , blaming a man with a question,
Am I to blame because I'm a man
He may be a different person
Elaboration requires consistency in speech and promise
That is how an explanation should be made or done.
Just a feeling !
2007-08-07 09:38:20
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answered by Anonymous
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JJ - she's cool. i'm together with her! I observed that stupid little tidbit interior the Yahoo events or regardless of it somewhat is. did no longer, does no longer, ought to certainly no longer click on it. Angelina Jolie is a house-wrecker, hyped up, nanny loving (truly, who thinks she will enhance that muddle?) over publicized yuck.
2016-10-13 11:04:40
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answered by Anonymous
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Princess, this is not a poem. This is a complaint. And you are telling the wrong people. You need to tell the person/people who ticked you off. Period.
2007-08-06 17:50:06
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answered by margot 5
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yes anyone care for you.........
2007-08-01 18:01:03
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answered by ○♫mhytzhe○♫ 4
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