MY PHEONIX
Hot air grazes my tongue
as I whisper hate into my atmosphere
screaming murder into the halo above
poisoning, blackening it as I stand here
filling the clouds in my sky with blood
flying high above me inside
now raining pure evil from my center
the devils blood
slitting, cutting, bleeding from the pressure
hallowing my viens
numbing the deep pain
waiting to exhail, but don't breath
everyone I will fail, but I will be free
I smiled in the dark as my light faded away
my former self got whisked into the sun of day
as I burned in the fire below
I realize I have lost my halo
I am rebourn upon my ashes
now between my dark and light there would be no more clashes
2007-08-01 14:48:39 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
It's about how I've changed so much over the summer.Becoming a sort of darker person.And yes I do cut sometimes when my emotions of anger and grief overwelm me.But when I cut I become numb.Once I was cutting really bad out of desperation to feel something.
2007-08-01 17:49:38 · update #1
Yeah right.I believe in GOD but not a church goer.I would NOT fit in at ALL at church!
2007-08-02 19:18:54 · update #2
wow, that's awesome, ya i think everyone feels like that every once in a while...
2007-08-01 14:52:09 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well first it made me think of the book Phoenix Rising ~ second I dont think anyone should have to overcome anything so horrible-sounding but at least in the poem you or whoever did and that what I see is relatable...ofcourse my day has yet to come...(Im not screaming murder or nothing either lol)
2007-08-01 21:54:02 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its kind of dark and shows how hurt you are. You got to share your anger and or emotional status you are in.
Please "RUN" to the nearest church you can find.
2007-08-02 05:57:16 · answer #3 · answered by kaiviti 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like you've come to terms with you anger, and we all have anger. Good for you.
2007-08-01 21:57:24 · answer #4 · answered by soulguy85 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
So Sad......too bad you feel so lost........... I feel sorry for you .......... I hope you find yourself and become a happier person..... so that you can enjoy heaven someday, not hell............
2007-08-01 21:53:42 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow are you depressed? sounds like once you was an angle now you've gone to hell .........
2007-08-01 22:19:50 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds like your a cutter....you shouldn't do that....trust me i know from experience
2007-08-01 23:55:14 · answer #7 · answered by Snape_Slayer 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋