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Verbal incriminates Keyser; this leads the audience to believe that they are two different subjects because otherwise, Verbal would be incriminating himself.
2007-08-01 10:59:28 · 4 answers · asked by leoncita 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Verbal incriminates Keyser, which leads the audience to believe that they are two different subjects. Otherwise, Verbal would be incriminating himself.
2007-08-01 11:11:39 · answer #1 · answered by tlb5859 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad, but you have a slight run-on sentence. To make it clearer, I would rewrite it with slight changes:
Verbal incriminates Keyser which leads the audience to believe they are two different subjects. Otherwise, Verbal would be incriminating himself.
2007-08-01 18:42:34 · answer #2 · answered by Adios 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Because Verbal incriminates Keyser, this would lead the audience to believe that there are two different subjects. Otherwise, Verbal would be incriminating himself.
2007-08-01 18:13:52 · answer #3 · answered by Frosty 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Verbal incriminates Keyser, leading the audience to believe that they are two different subjects; otherwise, Verbal would be incriminating himself.
To avoid incrimating himself, Verbal incriminates Keyser, which leads the audience to believe that they are two different subjects.
To avoid incrimating himself, Verbal incriminates Keyser, leading the audience to believe that they are two different subjects.
2007-08-05 15:40:12 · answer #4 · answered by maî 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋