Let me live as I live
And let me die as I wish to die.
Let me be shot with your gun
Then be kept in a cage
and made to run.
Yes I’ll run
May, then, I not win the race;
May, then, I fall hundred times while a step
But let me rise up
On my own legs
On my souls call
Then on fire of your gun.
I don’t fear the gun
Neither I fear to face the race;
But I can’t carry the chariot
Where you hold a stick
And ask me to take your turns.
Yes, I’ll carry the chariot,
Neither I fear to face the turns.
Turns
Let them be sharp
And then
Let me clash with them
With my own chariot
Let me live as I live as live
And then I will die
As destiny asks me to die.
2007-08-01 06:04:57 · 8 answers · asked by ALOK K 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
not really sure what it is about, but i liked the flow of it.
2007-08-01 06:13:56 · answer #1 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh, yes, the great spirit! But then, a little bit of conflict in the thoughts, a semblance of contradiction somewhere there, unlike the other two pieces! Nevertheless, good powerful expression, good attempt! well done!
2007-08-04 06:23:16 · answer #2 · answered by swanjarvi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Gibberish.
2007-08-01 13:55:15 · answer #3 · answered by Ronnie 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I can't really get into it. Maybe if you used one of the standard poetic forms instead of free verse ...
2007-08-01 13:21:13 · answer #4 · answered by Cinnibuns 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm guessing your not afraid of death and your not afraid to live life either
2007-08-01 13:16:04 · answer #5 · answered by amanda a 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's super lame.
2007-08-01 13:44:53 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its great ...do post it on chumma@yahoogroups.com
2007-08-01 13:18:06 · answer #7 · answered by shaktimaan 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its quit interesting..............
2007-08-02 16:14:02 · answer #8 · answered by Shivi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋