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Currently Sharia Bank is still focused on the consumptive credit, not productive credit. With its profit sharing principle, Sharia Bank is supposed to give a big portion for productive credit. Sharia Bank tends to prioritize consumptive credits for the sake of profitability and practicality in channeling credits.
2007-07-31 21:47:07 · 7 answers · asked by tryme 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
well, for a start, it's not a sentence. they are sentences :)
and i'ld rephrase your sentences as follows:
Currently Sharia Bank is focused on consumptive credit, not productive credit. According to its profit sharing principle, Sharia Bank is supposed to give a big(ger? or larger?) portion toward productive credit, but it tends to contribute a larger portion toward consumptive credit because it is more profitable and practical for channeling credits.
how was that? :D
2007-07-31 22:00:39 · answer #1 · answered by wat_more_can_i_say? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Currently Sharia Bank is still focused on the consumptive credit, not productive credit. With its profit sharing principle, Banks are supposed to give a big portion (of what?) for productive credit. Banks tend to prioritize consumptive credit for the sake of profitability and practicality in channeling credit.
2007-07-31 22:11:34 · answer #2 · answered by Joe 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sharia Bank is still focused on consumptive credit, not productive credit. (A few redundant words in there) With its profit sharing principle, Sharia Bank should allocate a much larger portion to productive credit. Sharia Bank tends to prioritize consumptive credits for the sake of profitability and practicality in channeling credits (.... however, what's wrong with that ... we're a bank!). However this is a short sighted view as long term returns .... (perhaps)
2007-07-31 21:56:47 · answer #3 · answered by Quandary 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well, I don't know what "consumptive credit" and "productive credit" are, but I can try...
Sharia Bank's focus remains consumptive, rather than productive credit.
I don't really understand the second sentence. Most of the profits it shares are supposed to go to those who generate productive credit?
I think you want "credit" rather than "credits" in the third sentence, but again, I don't really understand it.
One problem I have with your paragraph is that the relationship between the sentences is unclear. Are you disapproving of Sharia Bank's priorities? It's not doing what it's supposed to do?
2007-07-31 22:05:40 · answer #4 · answered by Goddess of Grammar 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I see one thing missing. Everythign else is correct.
With its profit sharing principle, Sharia Bank is supposed to give a big portion [OF WHAT?] for productive credit.
2007-07-31 21:57:12 · answer #5 · answered by jax_rerun 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your constant use of "Sharia Bank" is getting repetitive. Please leave the first Sharia bank and remove the other 2.
2007-07-31 21:56:04 · answer #6 · answered by ♤ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Add a comma after the first word. Also, instead of the word "big"...how about using the word "large".
2007-07-31 21:56:31 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋