It’s been so long since we talked. I know it’s hard after what’s gone on. Forgive me for the past and the future is just around the corner. We are far away. I want to close the gap between us. We went out a couple times, but you let your friends end us. Many confused feelings and words that came out at the wrong time and place. You let your friends ruin us. We are now split in two. My heart is also broken into two pieces. I know deep inside your feelings for me are lost and confused. You care about me inside. Your letting your friend’s ruin your life. Love is about how you feel about the person. Not letting your so called friends prank call and judge my love for you when I was sick. You know you love me inside but you won’t show it you’re scared about what will happen when it comes to this. We are far away from love and friendship. Trust me I love you. We are meant to be. You just let your friends ruin it for me. In the end when it comes to this, is far as you want to be. I will be waiting on the beach for you to say I’m sorry again and I love you. Will you go out with me?
2007-07-31 17:03:58 · 7 answers · asked by princess 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
this is what actually happend. I put it into a poem.
2007-07-31 17:38:19 · update #1
good, but I don't like the end, "will you go out with me" sounds like what someone would say the first time they were asking someone out on a date for the first time, so it weakens it.
2007-07-31 17:10:29 · answer #1 · answered by secretservice 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's a little confuse at the end.
2007-08-01 00:13:35 · answer #2 · answered by luna. 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like a letter to me.
Send it and see what your reply will be.
Peace
2007-08-01 01:18:38 · answer #3 · answered by Sam 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Oh why that is lovely.
Wonderful.
2007-08-01 07:54:54 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dump him.
2007-08-07 00:46:21 · answer #5 · answered by margot 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nope
2007-08-01 00:08:16 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
TO DA HEART!!! BRAVO!!!!!
2007-08-01 00:07:38 · answer #7 · answered by ~ Cutie with Anwsers ~ 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋