Whenever you sit under a tree
And none with you
Still not alone but loneliness and calmness of ocean
Those silent waves
Which engulfs your smile but asks you not to cry?
Sit within your own heart
Just think of me-
A boy not so vibrant, a friend of yours
Will be happy to be
Even in darkest corner of your heart.
2007-07-31 08:05:45 · 9 answers · asked by ALOK K 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
nothing
2007-07-31 08:12:25 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Another star worthy poem from the same pen, same heart! Certainly a good one! You will win many hearts with your creations, not just the darkest corners, but soft and bright rooms in hearts!
2007-08-03 23:18:12 · answer #2 · answered by swanjarvi 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wonderful
2007-07-31 08:19:29 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
hi alok,
I think you are a great poet. I really like ur poem so, i want to suggest u dont stop write a poem.
2007-07-31 23:46:14 · answer #4 · answered by poo 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Are you pouring your emotions , sorrow lies within your heart or somebody else's.
2007-08-02 03:08:39 · answer #5 · answered by manu 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good poem.
2007-07-31 13:30:31 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
very interesting
2007-07-31 23:23:31 · answer #7 · answered by geet 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice poem........grt
2007-08-02 09:17:14 · answer #8 · answered by Shivi 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hi
fabulous.............................................................................................................................................................
2007-08-01 02:04:44 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋