Been thinking about Vanilla cake lately
I've been thinking of you
You sweet vanilla cake you
I've been thinking of Suzanna vanilla
Together with all those ingredients
You make a fine vanilla
I think I'll start you off from stretch
First the hard base baby
Make the body tender,oh for ever so sweet!
Then just add some liquids
You look stiff, lets put you
On the treed mill too
Out for a jog
For a Mile or two
Get you all silky and soft
I'll get the audience seated
While you prepare for your finally launch
The Sweets are oozing
As i'll be sliding you into the heat
Do you feel the intensity
Damn your so hot
I sure hope you do.
2007-07-31 08:02:09 · 5 answers · asked by Moanika 6 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
My birthday is coming soon, making vanilla cake!!!1
2007-07-31 08:07:13 · update #1
Sorry, but I really don't like this. I get the point that you are addressing more than cake, but some of it doesn't even make sense sexually. Some of the lines are still pretty good. It just needs a little reworking. Keep reading it. All of the parts don't flow. Good luck! ;)
Baby,
with all those ingredients
you just can't help but make
my sweet tooth start to water
for some damn vanilla cake!
2007-07-31 08:20:13 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it, so I will not delete it, I would like a vanilla CAKE my self ok
2007-08-02 11:12:01 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
....well as long as its not about Vanilla Ice I won't throw up
2007-07-31 15:06:24 · answer #3 · answered by Ronatnyu 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
cool
I like it a lot
it's so chill :)
2007-07-31 15:05:36 · answer #4 · answered by Angelacia baybeeeeee 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
crave much?
2007-07-31 15:06:14 · answer #5 · answered by Spacepirate 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋