Please rate this song!?!!?

Question

It's in the tune of High School Musical's "The Start of Something New"
I changed to lyrics to relate to government


Living in the US
Didn't understand
That we can have the power
If we take a chance
I never believed in
What I never knew
I never opened my eyes, yeah
To all the possibilities, oo-oooh
I know, that the world can be changed
Never knew this before
But right here today

*CHORUS*
This could be the start of policy
We'll shape Congress
to our own degree
And now looking in the past
I know in my mind
The start of policy

Now who'd ever thought that
We each could have a say
And the world looks so much brighter
With democracy
I know, that we'll make a change
If we cast a vote
For our future's sake

*CHORUS*


That's all I have right now, please tell me if it's good or not?? Our assignment was to make a song that relates to government in the tune of a popular song

Answer 1

I don't know, it's kind of "dissing" the government a bit, I'm very Conservative. But it's not bad, I have to be honest, sounds like something you'd sing in school.