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No, I don't need you
yes I still care,
No, I don't mind if I'm here and your there.
Yes, I still want you
No, I'll get by,
Yes I still love you
No, I won't cry.
Yes, I'll be happy
No, I don't mind,
Yes, I'll keep trying
No, I'll be fine.
Yes, you must go now
come on now don't cry,
Yes I still love you
I Love You
Goodbye.


Sad but I have always liked it, by the way it's by anonymous.

2007-07-30 16:49:02 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities Poetry

2 answers

i really like it 2, it is really good!! what site did you find it on? who ever made this is ver talented, i also like that it had great rhythm and actually meant something!

2007-07-30 16:58:10 · answer #1 · answered by ? 3 · 0 0

I've never seen it before, but it shows good use of thesis/antithesis; the yes/no back and forth is a good push-pull method at times, especially here where the speaker is trying to say goodbye but keeps being pulled back into another answer.

very well done, anonymous :)

2007-08-03 00:19:42 · answer #2 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 0 0

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