Artificial light confuses,
Gypsy and diamondback moth,
Mock moons on a shifting horizon,
Pear tree perched swallows,
Feast on codling flutterers,
Cabbage and watercress,
Will not morn the loss,
Of such insatiable appetites.
2007-07-30 03:22:59 · 6 answers · asked by TD Euwaite? 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
So...even professional poets get criticisms from answerers. Well I'm glad I'm not the only one, though I'm far from being a pro.
2007-07-30 03:56:17 · answer #1 · answered by Anthony C 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
been exterminating insects again, eh ?
I like it...
Damn, Tyler is loose again, I told that Mock not to moon the horizon.... I see he also swallowed a pear tree while perching, damn!!!, I am sorry...
2007-07-30 10:34:50 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Gloomy
2007-07-30 10:29:58 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I love the imagery in this one; the language is very tight, and I love the perspective move in the last stanza.
2007-07-30 13:16:49 · answer #4 · answered by Jeff R 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
actually - yes ,I do.
it needs to be cleaned up some, but overall it's pretty good.
I don't say that often on this forum.
2007-07-30 10:32:27 · answer #5 · answered by art_flood 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
i like it
2007-07-30 10:46:40 · answer #6 · answered by Emmy 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋