i gotta write a song 4 school and its not finished yet but will u give me ur honest opinion on how it sounds so far im gonna make it n2 a classic rock type song w/ maybe an ac/dc or gnr gtr. type riff behind it keep n mind im on 14 and i dont thing its good actually it dont make no sence 2 me jst trying to git every1 else's opinion so here goes these r the lyrics:
they say she needs to grow up they say she needs to learn they say she's gotta hard way 2 go and she knows she jst stays that way any ways no matter what her daddy says
chorus:she's a wannabe drag queen almost seventeen trying to get through the mean she's got big dream of the city pity she cant find away she's jst living 4 2-day trying to graduate trying to replace h8 4 the world than again she's jst a girl.
she broke up with jonny two months ago she still hasnt gotten over it for a while all she did was sit in her room and cry but she trys yeah she trys
its not finished yet but what do u think so far...sry so long!!
2007-07-29 18:30:34 · 6 answers · asked by I am the Walrus, Lestat! 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Lyrics
I have to say i really like htos lyrics alot your pretty good. if you dont mind i would like to see it when your done also.
2007-07-29 19:12:16 · answer #1 · answered by DUSTAN V 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sturdy sturdy sturdy. yet i made some corrections/modifications.. wish you like it Your lips stained with silence, afraid to speak the certainty, the guilt, that plummets among your chest. The aching rage of a lie as quickly as instructed to bypass the time, I enjoyed the type you spoke fake accusations, the course that wind blows, they got here decrease back at you, hit you suitable interior the face. evade the bullet, duck for canopy sooner or later perhaps you will detect Whispers flow the shadows in the process the dark the human beings talk approximately us; hushed tones and there I stare, right into a black empty solitude frost bitten cheeks and glass stained lips, brave honest, organic as this, masked cigarette I swear can’t you pay attention it talk? And all I’ve ever known we will under no circumstances be, all those can provide you made i'm going to under no circumstances get to work out... lacking, power to declare you’re sorry hoping, your silence is your apology. despite befell to our white wedding ceremony, that white wooden fence? carried in my pocket for a wet day replaced into the letter you had written me the different day it wasnt actual, the letter from you I nonetheless think of of it and how which you may say... And all I’ve ever known we will under no circumstances be, all those can provide you made i'm going to under no circumstances get to work out... lacking, power to declare you’re sorry hoping, your silence is your apology. yet despite befell to our white wedding ceremony, that white wooden fence? Weren’t we meant to be continuously, isn’t that what I signed up for? the dotted line, crossed my T’s and dotted I’s. I could’ve circled and regarded to work out, you no longer staring decrease back at me And all I’ve ever known we will under no circumstances be, all those can provide you made i'm going to under no circumstances get to work out... and that i attempted now, so perplexing why did it is going to crumble, it didnt could be this way issues won't in any respect be the comparable for me, for us, we will under no circumstances be. l. a. l. a. l. a. l. a. lalala l. a. lalala l. a. da ...dada da...
2016-10-09 13:15:46 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice but it dependes on how you sing i give it a 7 out of 10 ^^
2007-07-29 18:38:41 · answer #3 · answered by Cirno 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
wow. that sounds like it's gonna be an awesome song. i love it. 5 stars!
2007-07-29 18:44:39 · answer #4 · answered by llamalover 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like it =)
2007-07-29 18:34:01 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
ummmm its ok.......
2007-07-29 18:34:31 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋