how can i switch up a few words in this sentence to make it sound better...
"one of the main reasons why she does not marry him is because he is considered poor and she is rich"
how can i make this sentence better? thanks
2007-07-29 18:03:40 · 7 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
one of the reasons why she did not marry him was because he was considered poor, and she was rich.
the main reason she didnt marry him was because he was poor
the main reason why she doesnt marry him is because he is poor, and she is rich
2007-07-29 18:06:38 · answer #1 · answered by Shake-Zula 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Here are numerous variations:
The contrast of her wealth to his poverty is one of the main reasons why she does not marry him.
Having riches, she finds that one of the main reasons for not marrying him is his poverty.
One of the main reasons she chooses not to marry him is the difference in their socio-economic classes.
Mainly, she reasons that she should not marry him because she is wealthy and he is poor.
2007-07-29 18:25:43 · answer #2 · answered by Think 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
The difference in social classes caused her not to marry him, as she was rich while he was poor.
2007-07-29 19:33:28 · answer #3 · answered by tate 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
She is rich, so a major reason why she won't marry him is that he's considered to be poor.
2007-07-29 18:15:54 · answer #4 · answered by M O R P H E U S 7 · 4⤊ 0⤋
You're sentence structure sounds fine by me.
2007-07-29 18:18:05 · answer #5 · answered by birdtennis 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Her wealth was the essential reason she chose not to marry the man she regarded as poor.
(May I ask then, who is the one who really resides in poverty? It is she of course; poverty of spirit.)
2007-07-29 18:24:21 · answer #6 · answered by oop 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
she won't marry him because she is an upperclass snob.
2007-07-29 18:18:04 · answer #7 · answered by shazam 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋