read this sentenses and correct any tense errors
a) home computers are becoming more and more popular
b) this week, the shop sells sowtware at 20% off.
c) Don't use the phone downstairs for the next twenty minutes as i am surfing the web
d) as soon as you are using the computer, you realise how helpful it is.
e) when you buy a new computer, you are getting a lot of free software
f) many children prefer computers to books
2007-07-29 14:03:20 · 5 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Perfect!
No Tense Error.
Only one glaring Grammatical (punctuation) Mistake is the First Letter of Every Sentence should beging with a Capital Letter.
Sentence a) given in the question should read as:
a) Home computers are becoming more and more popular.
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2007-07-29 20:37:55 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
For D and E, you don't have to use "are." Try something like "As soon as you use the computer, you realize how helpful it is," or "When you buy a computer, you get a lot of free software." The way you have it now sounds a bit awkward. Other than that, it looks OK--though remember to capitalize at the beginning of every sentence.
2007-07-30 07:31:56 · answer #2 · answered by ndwyvern 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
/This sentences/ is wrong. These sentences or this sentence.
No tense errors as far as I can see.
Some capital letters missing. and periods at the ends.
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2007-07-29 21:19:46 · answer #3 · answered by thisbrit 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Theese sentences are right.
2007-07-29 21:21:46 · answer #4 · answered by pizza192002 3 · 0⤊ 3⤋
No.
Say please next time.
2007-07-29 21:16:38 · answer #5 · answered by chameleon 4 · 1⤊ 2⤋