tell me what u think of this poem..plz?

Question

I'm no little kid
who needs to be led by hand
ive grown from the day
my life was turned around

things have been thrown at me
from the day i was born
and i'm getting more used to it
as the days wear on

sometimes i think this way
yet i know it's not all that
but can u honestly blame me
for feeling that it's all just crap

these things that have happened
have pushed me to the edge
and now there you are
STILL holding my hand

i may still be young
and i'm perfectly fine with that
it's just that i am growing
and i don't constantly need u on my back

i'm looking around
and i'm surprised at what i see
because i see 10 yr olds
being able to do more than me

i've stopped the talking
and constant chattering
b/c i don't see the point anymore
when you don't even listen to a quarter of what i say

diff things have happend
and it's taking all of what i can do
to keep myself under control
and not walk out that door

take me for me
let me grow up at least
too much has already happened
for me to let this slip

i've seen broken families
and been part of them too
i've had loved ones take from me
and there's nothing i could do

now all i know
and all i can do
is what is coming through

my mind is full of so many things
and it worries to no end
i want to be comfortable where ever i am
but rite now i just want to get out of here again

i am my own person
and never will be anything else
so plz let me be me
and take care of myself

i wrote this poem.. and i am 16.. been writing for w hile now

Answer 1

Very nice. It shows all your emotions at once. I like the fact that you have shown constant struggle you feel and I think you will figure it all out eventually. Keep up the good work.

Answer 2

it seems like you're in pain but it's not unlike any pain that others have felt during the time they were growing up. I would only say that your pain is not unique and many around the globe, in many cultures are, at this very moment, feeling the same way. Sorry! that's just how it goes....

Answer 3

You know..We talked about this but I think maybe just euther writing her a note or sending her an email may clear ground and keep it there...my suggestion..it's very good bumper..just give it a little more time

Answer 4

It's beautiful.Try singing it.Most poems are great as songs.I like it,did you write it or read it?If you read it,who's the poet?If you wrote it,Good job.

Answer 5

You have family problems right? You don't what to part with your parents or siblings. People always blame you. THAT"S WHAT I GOT.........

Answer 6

Very long but other than that it's cool

Answer 7

very good that sounds like my cousin hhmmm