"Criminally Vulgar"
Waking in darkness, this is not a dream.
It's criminally vulgar.
A nymphomaniac leaves me staring at something that isn't there.
The illusion of Love,it's criminally vulgar with a serious grin.
Criminally vulgar in the unity of friends,
criminally vulgar in the laughter as they unite against me.
Lust controls desire.
Desire draws them near.
I am Love where there is no Love.
The darkness of the light.
I can not hide, fuss or fight.
It's the end of something that never began.
It's criminally vulgar.
2007-07-28 05:13:48 · 4 answers · asked by catsclaw 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I love it!
Now, let me share a poem with you!
Keep writing! Can't wait till the next one!
2007-07-28 05:44:27 · answer #1 · answered by Anthony C 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well that was criminally vulgar - a life in the boudouis of ladies in a darkness.
Well written - tad repetative but gets the message over.
Be careful with the umbrellas!
2007-07-28 17:41:42 · answer #2 · answered by upyerjumper 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is a good poem.. it is deep... I don't understand what is meant by criminally vulgar, but then again... that is part of writing poetry.. everyone makes their own interpretation upon reading it. Keep up the good work and keep writing.. you have a natural talent for choosing words that contrast and compare...
2007-07-28 13:01:41 · answer #3 · answered by MurphysGirl 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is well written
well thought of
this covers things like dreams
and love
emotions.
friends.
2007-07-28 12:41:18 · answer #4 · answered by sweet_blue 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋