It is as if nothing ever goes my way
I try so hard
To live a happy life
But is always
Something
Lurking in the
Dark
Just waiting
To pull
Me down
It is suppose
To be
My day
My birthday
21
I will be
But tragedy
Is all
That struck
So
I will
Cancel
All
My
Plans
I will turn off my phone
I will
Celebrate this
Day in misery
No friends
No family
I will
Be by myself
Crying
And
Anticipating
That day I will move
And get away from
What makes
Me cry at night
Running away I am
Getting away
From
My misery
So happy birthday to me
I don’t anyone else to say it
Because I really mean it
2007-07-26 16:08:11 · 6 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
this is an edited verison of my poem
2007-07-26 16:09:15 · update #1
i didnt like it
2007-07-26 16:10:45 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Very emotional and touchy, to say the very least. I also thought it got the point across, had a good hook and flowed throughout.
2007-07-26 23:12:15 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hey, Honey, I'm sorry you're having a bad day.
I'd wish you a happy one, but doubt you want to hear it right now.
Maybe tomorrow will be better.
2007-07-26 23:12:11 · answer #3 · answered by diannegoodwin@sbcglobal.net 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i read the other one too...that wasn't bad . But edition has beautified it more !
2007-07-27 06:47:39 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like poems with rhythm, and... this is really sad.
2007-07-26 23:11:57 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That was about as glum and gloomy as it gets!
2007-07-26 23:11:44 · answer #6 · answered by Luv2no is in the house 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋