remember the time that one man wrote the song
about the
dying elderly
and ? . the
department of
forestry withholding
payment I do
2007-07-24 16:41:39 · 5 answers · asked by Kiril 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
The question mark in the center seems appropriate...because that is how I feel after reading this poem.
2007-07-24 16:52:51 · answer #1 · answered by carmenivy 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'll give you a "1" for posting. A "poem" must have a point. Is the "?" meant to signify "questioned"? I thought maybe it was an acrosstic...but radadfp didn't seem to make sense either.
so...that's it...I rate it a "1"...at least I took the time to try.
2007-07-28 23:07:15 · answer #2 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Would you consider bringing "I do" to the next line? I would like to see a bunch of your poems at once. If a poem is a picture, and some are paintings, yours are stamps, and I want to collect them. I think I like this one a lot. I need to ponder it some more, (not your poem, my preference).
2007-07-24 23:52:55 · answer #3 · answered by willow 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
doesn't flow i give it a 2 on a scale of 1 to 10
2007-07-24 23:50:00 · answer #4 · answered by blondeone9606 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
ok cool
2007-07-24 23:49:48 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋