Some people are very annoying, like me
That's why we always try to look on the bright side of things.
For example, it's very warm in here.
2007-07-24 16:37:29 · 7 answers · asked by Kiril 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
id give it a 3
2007-07-24 16:44:47 · answer #1 · answered by jet 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Bradley's sweater is really warm,
just because the bees did swarm.
Eaten up by pickled yams,
go help that beaver build his dam.
Thats what i think.
2007-07-25 00:01:09 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
dude what is this rate my poems.excuse me ; but these are not even poems, these are jumbled words; and my 3yr old could do better,find another pass time; as poetry is not it.i give it a o-
2007-07-25 01:04:26 · answer #3 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As a poem, I'd give it a "1"...as a stand-up comic's line, I'd give it a "4".
good luck, and goodnight
2007-07-28 01:53:34 · answer #4 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Don't quit your day job
2007-07-24 23:45:50 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
you must have a big loving heart for idiots ;)
2007-07-24 23:45:16 · answer #6 · answered by sinfulprey 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
simple,weak,boring,thought less
2007-07-28 22:37:56 · answer #7 · answered by book writer 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋