Well, I'm a bit late on Cinnamon's challenge from yesterday (stupid work lol). I attempted a Ruba'i. This is my first and after reading some of Fr Al's work and thinking about an 8th Century Hymn I remember "Let All Mortal Flesh Keep Silent" I wrote this. I was guessing my way through this form and would appreciate any feedback (if religious themes bother you stop here, it is not my desire to upset anyone).
On That Day
I know for certain I will die
To slide, to slip into the sky.
The clay around me starts to wear,
So little time to say goodbye.
To leave behind this mortal care,
Caught up to meet You in the air,
Changed in seconds without delay,
No longer shielded from Your stare.
All will be silent on that day,
As every tear You wipe away.
The pressures of this life will cease,
Darkness no longer on display.
I will not pray for this release;
Life’s joys though fleeting do increase.
Choosing to live within Your plan,
Knowing one day there will be peace.
2007-07-24
04:12:48
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