Good evening, ladies and gentlemen. My name is Ian. It's fantastic to see all of you here. And, I am very honored to be part of tonight's instrumental performance to you. I will be playing glockenspiel, a song called “River.” You will be seeing many of us presenting an ensemble which we have practiced for a long time. We appreciate who has been supportive to let us learn playing musical instruments, but what we are presenting here tonight is how we learn the true value of teamwork through the taking this challenge and putting efforts to make tonight's performance to happen. Please enjoy the show.
2007-07-20 23:23:04 · 6 answers · asked by Cindy L 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Theater & Acting
Good evening, ladies and gentlemen. My name is Ian. It's fantastic to see all of you here and I am very honored to be part of tonight's instrumental performance for you. I will be playing glockenspiel, a song called “River.” You will be seeing many of us presenting an ensemble which we have practiced for a long time. We appreciate those who have supported us in learning to play musical instruments, but what we are presenting here tonight is how we learn the true value of teamwork, through taking this challenge and putting our efforts into making tonight's performance happen. Please enjoy the show.
2007-07-20 23:47:32 · answer #1 · answered by Vertigo 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
We appreciate those who have allowed us to learn playing musical instruments. What we are presenting here tonight is, how we learn the true value of teamwork through taking this challenge and putting the efforts in to make tonight's performance happen. Please enjoy the show.
The intro is fine, maybre you could also leave out to you, (performance.) but I have edited the rest good luck
2007-07-21 06:35:27 · answer #2 · answered by sidestepper11 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"We appreciate who has been supportive to let us learn playing musical instruments, but what we are presenting here tonight is how we learn the true value of teamwork through the taking this challenge and putting efforts to make tonight's performance to happen."
Please change it to:
"We appreciate all those, who have been supportive to let us learn playing musical instruments, but what we are presenting here tonight is how we learn the true value of teamwork through taking this challenge and putting efforts to make tonight's performance to happen."
2007-07-21 06:35:29 · answer #3 · answered by Swamy 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I only caught one problem: We appreciate everyone who has been supportive to let us learn playing musical instruments
2007-07-21 06:32:31 · answer #4 · answered by LolaC☼ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Where are you from? It's not perfect but you write better than most native speakers. Tip of the cap to the education system in your country. It's better than ours for sure. I wouldn't change anything. Everyone will understand you for sure. Hope the show goes great!
2007-07-21 06:36:27 · answer #5 · answered by Big R 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey, i gave it a read and it seems nice* good luck on your show*
2007-07-21 06:27:38 · answer #6 · answered by neogiee 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋