Like, here's my poem. You like, totally have to like... read it! like OMG!
Like, here:
Scarring covers my face,
bruises cover my arms.
I lost the race,
I ignored the alarms.
My wrists broken,
My head so twisted.
Been given a death token.
Wish I never existed.
Going down so quickly,
no time ever wasted.
I've only become sickly,
Been pasted on a knife.
So as I pass away,
just remember one thing.
Through the night and day,
just know skin cancer was my ping.
OK, like omg! There it is!!!!!! I'm like so scared, because i like, really don't like it... but what do you think?? THANK YOU!!!
p.s. I don't normally talk like that, but I had to talk like this for the whole day. I lost a bet =(
2007-07-19 13:57:43 · 9 answers · asked by . 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
oh this line, "Been pasted on a knife." should be,
"On a knife i've been pasted"
sorry!
2007-07-19 13:58:47 · update #1
heather, like i said, I had to talk like that... you know? the whole "omg" thing, because i lost a bet.
2007-07-19 14:03:09 · update #2
like OMG i like loved it
2007-07-19 14:01:21 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
Totally.
2007-07-19 14:05:40 · answer #2 · answered by surffsav 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Like omg omg omg like can I like slap you omg omg?
Well you didn't say that before. Anyways, why should that have anything to do with how you type?
It makes you look stupid and no one is going to take you seriously.
2007-07-19 14:01:57 · answer #3 · answered by Heather 6 · 2⤊ 2⤋
BAD timing to post this when you were trying to fulfill your bet obligation.
I had a real hard time not thinking of you as a complet fing idiot, so it was hard to read the poem.
try again in a week.
2007-07-19 14:06:03 · answer #4 · answered by Mandaladreamer 5 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Like, omg ... you're, like, my soulmate! Like, you should totally let your,like, inner valley girl, like, shine more often!
We're, like, totally Legally Blonde together!
2007-07-20 03:14:47 · answer #5 · answered by Cinnibuns 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Dude ok poem.keep trying though,
2007-07-19 15:07:01 · answer #6 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it was good. ignore the idiots. i hope you only have to do the "omg" thing for today, cuz that would suck.
2007-07-19 14:08:47 · answer #7 · answered by * 6 · 1⤊ 2⤋
eccentric question, dark poem. not the best, but very expressive.
2007-07-19 14:00:46 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
Like OMG!!!! You suck!!!!!!!
2007-07-19 14:48:32 · answer #9 · answered by . 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋