Heartsteps
How could he betray you?
He is so cruel
You offered him the flower of your heart
Caressed its petals
Embraced its wonderful scent
And gave it all to him
What a silly fool you were
He didn’t take care of it
He didn’t put it in a nice vase with water by the windowsill
Occasionally looking upon it with love
Oh, no
He ripped apart the petals
One by one
Dropped the mess on the ground
And stomped and squished and ruined
Now you kneel before your torn heart
Picking up the pieces
Gathering them carefully as you cry
You try in vein to put it back together
But it just falls apart again
You silly fool
How could you do this to your own self?
Did you expect that his love for you
Would fix your already trouble heart?
You were so fragile
A whiff of hate would send your taped heart into scattered pieces
So why did you trust so hard?
How can you fix this mess
When you can’t take good enough care of yourself?
But I know
2007-07-17 09:16:21 · 11 answers · asked by agalicktourq 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
First you have to breathe again, and move on
Gather your weak legs
And your broken heart
And take the first step
Toward life again
2007-07-17 09:16:39 · update #1
btw this isnt true 4 me. i just wanted to put myself in another person's shoes. (thats how poetry sometimes works)
2007-07-17 09:24:49 · update #2
You are a good writed I like it very much , I understand it so much , take it as a lesson in life , and i hope you will write more poems . -B-
2007-07-17 09:44:54 · answer #1 · answered by bubbles 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
For me a poem has to have rhythm. It does not unavoidably could rhyme even though it desires to hit my thoughts. i think of readability of expression is crucial besides. i do no longer prefer to 2d wager what i'm analyzing approximately. I consistently look for what I term "poetic gemstones"interior the textual content cloth.
2016-12-10 15:02:50 · answer #2 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Amazing.
2007-07-17 10:12:45 · answer #3 · answered by Dinosaur 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice, nice. Love it.
5/5
2007-07-18 05:57:27 · answer #4 · answered by Brandon S 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How could he? Good for you to spilled out! don't worry dear you will get over it. Good thoughts I liked. Cheers!!
2007-07-17 09:45:21 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I will call it from the Soul of your Heart's Voice.
I cannot find any other words to describe it.
2007-07-17 09:26:23 · answer #6 · answered by Dr.Qutub 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Goog imagery.
2007-07-17 09:23:13 · answer #7 · answered by Billy Dee 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
its good but why would a girl let that bother her move on with life cuz u know he a pices of crap
2007-07-17 09:22:48 · answer #8 · answered by albert 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
liked it a lot!!
2007-07-17 10:37:37 · answer #9 · answered by Philomena M 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is a good one:) nice I like it.
KeEp W*r*I*t*T*i*N*g!
2007-07-17 10:13:03 · answer #10 · answered by Sh00ting_St@r! 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋