Your smile brightens up my day
I love you in every single way
Rucha I hope you see
See that you and me are meant to be
Be togeather
Together forever
Because when ever i see you
I can't controll my heart beat
Rucha I love you
Because you are so sweet.....
Ok usalley i can write a decent poem ....but today i can't think .. my friend is in love with this girl and he wanted me to write a poem for you telling her how he feels...its hard for me to write others feelings so can anyone fix this poem up or make a good poem that i can give him i dont want to let him down. All i know is here name is Rucha he has known her for 2 years , he loves her smile, and her laugh, he said he loves everything about her, but he isnt going out with her yet, he just wants to let her know how he feels can anyone help????
2007-07-16 22:22:49 · 8 answers · asked by fdffhhjyuj 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
PLease some one ....
2007-07-16 22:37:11 · update #1
There is not enough to go on to make it meaningful. Have your friend write down 5-10 sentences on what he likes specifically about Rucha. You should be able to take that content and compose something for him.
2007-07-17 01:19:58 · answer #1 · answered by Todd 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Poetry Is Too Personal A Thing Darl Sorry I Can't Give You Mine. Just Relax And Write From Your Own Perspective. Don't Try And Force It, Just Let It Happen.
You Have The Solution In Your Heart Darl Just Relax And Listen...
I Hope Your Friend Appreciates You!
2007-07-17 00:08:24 · answer #2 · answered by Paul R 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
How can someone expose their heart
to someone who makes or breaks their day
Who makes his heart beat faster just
by listening to what she has to say
Your laugh, your smile, my joy, you see
and yet my mouth won't speak
These words so you can hear my mind
Your heart is what I seek
Perhaps you find this note too strange
because you never knew I felt that way
Well I do, you see, and I always have
And I must write down what I can't say
So if you feel the same as I
If you, like me are just too shy
Tell me, please, don't be afraid
I'm just a normal guy
And if you don't, then that's okay
I'm not asking for what you can't give
It's enough that I've let you know my heart
And share the world in which you live
hope this helps
2007-07-19 10:00:24 · answer #3 · answered by Kevin S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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Please I need help with this poem???
Your smile brightens up my day
I love you in every single way
Rucha I hope you see
See that you and me are meant to be
Be togeather
Together forever
Because when ever i see you
I can't controll my heart beat
Rucha I love you
Because you are so sweet.....
Ok usalley i can write a...
2015-08-23 07:34:49 · answer #4 · answered by Florrie 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My life....
You came to my world like a daylight
Like a daydream.
You changed all the thing about the life
About the infinite.
You took all the chagrin from me
You are the lady of my heart
The source of my happiness
The ability of my destiny
I love you so much Rucha!
You are my love...
Good luck Honey.
I hope you and your friend like it.
Take care...
2007-07-16 22:47:31 · answer #5 · answered by mysterycfblue 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Your smile is my days glow
I just wanted you to know
I love you
I love everything about you
I hope that my heart is seen
Can't you see what we could be
Us together
Now, forever
'Cause when I look in your eyes
I see nothing but beautiful skies
Rucha, I can't control my heartbeat
Rucha, I love you
Because we were meant to be....
{hope i helped}
2007-07-17 09:11:04 · answer #6 · answered by ? 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Rucha? eh...can she get a new name? LOL. J/K J/K. I often try to capture a "picture" or emotion with my words. I find it better to not be so "forward" with my poetry but go about presenting something in a unique way. Like, instead of "I love you" something like: A burning fire inside, ceaseless and enduring...I dunno, thats just me.
2007-07-17 04:34:03 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
The night broke out heaven's shine
That time I saw your smile.
The rain ceased to be cold
When I heard your laugh.
The worst of days transformed best
As you entered near.
And my heart does back flips
Every minute I'm with you.
Rucha, I just want you to know
You're everything to me.
2007-07-16 22:44:27 · answer #8 · answered by Mary 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋