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This Down Payment Guarantee Letter shall contain no notes and other corrections.
______ If there are any notes or corrections, this Down Payment Guarantee Letter shall be deemed as being invalid.
2007-07-16 21:39:48 · 4 answers · asked by tryme 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
I'd say: "no notes or other corrections", and in the second part, "shall be deemed invalid".
2007-07-16 21:45:11 · answer #1 · answered by embroidery fan 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think the second version is more clear, and could be made clearer by stating:
"This down payment guarantee will become invalid, should any additions or alterations be made to it."
2007-07-17 04:48:03 · answer #2 · answered by AndrewG 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The second sentence should be changed to "...shall be deemed invalid," but otherwise, everything is fine.
2007-07-17 04:44:51 · answer #3 · answered by Riven Liether 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Why don't you just go see a lawyer and get professional legal advice?
2007-07-17 04:52:24 · answer #4 · answered by Booger 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋