For a while
I thought I fell asleep
Lying motionless inside a dream
Then rising suddenly
I felt a chilling breath upon me
She softly whispered in my ear
Forsaken
I have come for you tonight
Awaken
Look into my eyes and take my hand
Give yourself up to me
I waited painfully
For night to fall again
Trying to silence the fear within me
Out of an ivory mist
I felt a stinging kiss
And saw a crimson stain on her lips
I have to know your name
Where have I seen your face before?
My dear one don't you be afraid
2007-07-16 20:34:16 · 12 answers · asked by anuj m 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
That's a song? You mentioned neither Death nor the Devil. Get on point, you wonk!!!
Oh! The little lass has fear!!!! Mama! Mama!
Grow a pair!!!
2007-07-16 20:39:44 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Just a wee bit too 'gothic' for My tastes. But then again Your 'ode to a Vampire Lover' was amusing. 7 / 10 for effort.
2007-07-17 03:42:37 · answer #2 · answered by Ashleigh 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's pretty good. I liked it, but I might change the last line to something like:
My dear one, be not afraid,
..for in love, there is no shame.
2007-07-17 03:52:24 · answer #3 · answered by Missing neuron 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
A nice poem.
2007-07-17 03:38:24 · answer #4 · answered by freezing lady 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Dump her. She's a vampire.
2007-07-17 03:38:12 · answer #5 · answered by Voodoid 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
*Weeps* Mary! My name is Mary!!
2007-07-17 03:42:01 · answer #6 · answered by Mary 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
*holds up a mirror*
2007-07-17 03:37:07 · answer #7 · answered by A Military Veteran 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it was not
whats the question again ??
2007-07-17 03:37:49 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
flickin' my bic
2007-07-17 03:38:14 · answer #9 · answered by sammie 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I read the title as foreskin.......
2007-07-17 03:37:08 · answer #10 · answered by ... 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋