Suicide (as seen from the other side)
Way down under
feel the thunder
reeking havoc
from below
~
Flames rise higher
blue flamed fires
seeking mattock
tortured souls
~
Suicidal
oh so vital
blood seeps through
on into hell
~
Prayers have
been granted
Satan chanted
He’ll be watching you as well...
2007-07-16 13:55:32 · 9 answers · asked by ? 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
TDUB,
LOL, No sw33ty
but, if you don't like my poetry,
just don't read it kk?
This will help you know which ones are mine, they're all under "Shad" so just steer clear of the name and you should be ok..
All the Best, Shad @)~>~
2007-07-16 14:04:24 · update #1
Y Hallo Thar,
Wow, so cute that you actually know some slang, you're mum must be proud *^_^*
All the Best, Shad @)~>~
2007-07-16 15:01:33 · update #2
I read it as a fairly understandable take on your beliefs. What's wrong with that?
There isn't a subject that hasn't been written about. There aren't always answers to all that has been written. The difference is the way you write; I don't think it necessary to post insulting answers.
As you said, Shad, it's easy to just not read it. But then some people think their answers are justified simply because they wrote them...too bad for them.
It may not be the best you have written, but it isn't bad either.
2007-07-21 09:05:15 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
shad
another great poem as usual, Keep Writting!
ruth
2007-07-16 15:59:05 · answer #2 · answered by Sh00ting_St@r! 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
I live in a state that supports people who want to commit suicide. Many of us are free of associating death with some kind of reward and punishment idea. Many of us think of death as crossing to safety. It is life that is full of challenge and risk. It is death that ends the difficulties of life. Death is a blessing. What has all this nutty Satanism got to do with it? Keep doing Satanism and you can go to hell while you are still alive. Start treating yourself well and you will be in heaven while you are still alive. Heaven and hell are your choice. They happen now.
2007-07-16 14:05:53 · answer #3 · answered by bondioli22 4 · 1⤊ 3⤋
This poem is about suicide but it also talks about thunder
it talks about prayers,
this poem is written beautifully.
2007-07-16 14:38:48 · answer #4 · answered by sweet_blue 7 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Nice....suicide is not the answer to a prayer (my interpretation).......it is the devils prayers that have been granted........it is frown upon by the other side......but not them down below......hmmmmmm
One word i could not agree less
2007-07-16 17:36:43 · answer #5 · answered by soundfamiliar 4 · 1⤊ 2⤋
Well formed. good rhythm.
Would like to see more emotions from Satan character.
2007-07-24 07:27:48 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
ur poems are...different. its rhyming, flow, and rhythm are good, its well written.
2007-07-16 14:06:10 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Please tell me if any of your work has ever been publish
2007-07-18 11:25:55 · answer #8 · answered by kilroymaster 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
could you stop putting up these stupid poems
2007-07-16 13:58:18 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 6⤋