Okay, I HAD to write an ode on anything that I wanted to write it on. I chose the season, summer. Mainly because it has a lot of things that could be described and because it's summer right now. While writing this, I realized that I am not good at odes...lol...so, tell me what you think and what can I change?
I'm 14, btw....if that makes any difference...lol....and I get writer's block, especially when I have a topic thrown at me.
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2007-07-16
11:15:22
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➔ Poetry
Ode to Summer:
Ode to summer,
You’re my favorite time of the year.
Except when the humidity
Is too much to bear.
When you’re around,
It’s warm enough to swim
And lay on the beach
And bright green leaves
Cover each tree.
I love you, summer,
When I don’t have to think twice
About buying ice cream or water ice.
When your time comes,
People can switch to flip-flops and shorts
And go outside
To play their favorite sport
I love you, summer,
Where I can show off my toes
But one thing I hate
Is the bees and mosquitoes
Summer, you are fun,
Amusement parks with thrill rides
And there’s always time to go for a bike ride.
Summer, you go too fast
August then September,
Then, right back to the frigid winter.
2007-07-16
11:15:36 ·
update #1