Dull. Your synopsis is all about the meteor and its effects; people are only dealt with en masse. You need characters and a plot (where people make choices and perform actions) in order to make a compelling film.
2007-07-16 07:02:38
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answered by stmichaeldet 5
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I'd recommend outlining this movie idea. I'm having trouble understanding your plot, largely because of the lack of punctuation! But if I understand your idea, it's a good start, but definitely needs some work. For instance, when both people die, how is the girl supposed to receive forgiveness? This could be the start of the story. But instead of her dying, how about this... She's told that she is being given a second chance. Instead of dying, she was in a near death experience, has to go through a lot of struggles in her recovery, but realizes that she was given a chance to be forgiven. If your lesson is on forgiveness, why not show how she can give forgiveness. For instance, she has bitterness over her boyfriends' death (possibly he was upset when she overdosed and crashed the car on the way to the hospital). But through various situations, she learns how to forgive herself and to receive forgiveness.
2016-05-19 02:46:03
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answered by ? 3
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Like a cross between Armageddon, Sudden Impact and The Day After Tomorrow.
How did they survive?
2007-07-16 06:59:40
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answered by Viewaskew 4
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Sounds like a generic disaster movie that has been done 1000 times already.
2007-07-16 07:01:24
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answered by Anonymous
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I actually have actually altered my opinion, cuz over the days I've seen a lot of movies just like it. It doesn't sound too original. Work on it more, try to make it more unique, better than the rest. right now it sounds like sudden impact.
good luck
-cap10hook72-
2007-07-16 07:02:54
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answered by Anonymous
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Awesome, I'd love to see it. Reminds be of The Last Days.
2007-07-16 07:04:19
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answered by Browser 2
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I think I already saw this movie... twice.
2007-07-16 07:01:43
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answered by Mr. Taco 7
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not original, will not fly..think of something else, seems like u have creative imagination
2007-07-16 07:03:08
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answered by ♦cat 6
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been done
2007-07-16 07:01:29
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answered by Anonymous
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